See the big picture
Identify the structural, character and concept choices shaping the script as a whole.
Screenwriting RX
Healing scripts, one page at a time.
Direct, constructive feedback that helps you see the whole story—and the scene-level choices that will move your next draft forward.
25+ yearswriting and editing
1 weektypical turnaround
100%money-back guarantee
“As someone who reads 12–15 scripts a week, as well as manuscripts—he is a FANTASTIC writer.”
How the work gets better
Notes with a next move.
The goal is not a pile of observations. It is a clear path from the draft you have to the screenplay you are trying to write.
Sharpen the read
Address clarity, pacing, formatting and the details that affect how a reader experiences each scene.
Leave with direction
Turn feedback into practical revision priorities so you know what to tackle next.
From writers and filmmakers
The work speaks through the writers.
Nine perspectives on the insight, rigor and encouragement Chris brings to the page.
And heartfelt appreciation to my brilliant script consultant, Chris Lanning M.A., for his unwavering support and exceptional insight.
“Chris is very skilled. He has the ability to make you see how you can make good writing even better.”
“Chris offers good insight into industry and what is expected from professionals.”
“Actionable feedback for screenwriters who are looking to hone their skills in the art and technique of writing screenplays. And his spirit of encouragement is great!”
“Every time Chris reads a script of mine he provides at least three A-ha suggestions for improving the script or a new concept that I utilize. Chris doesn't rush through his notes. There's time for discussion.”
“The feedback. Networking. Productivity. Sense of progress… Highly recommended.”
“Excellent… sometimes feedback was extended into lessons about screenwriting that I could learn from.”
“Chris is one of the best, if not the best, script doctor I've had the pleasure of working with. His pricing is fair and his feedback is systematically created to move your script forward leaps and bounds. I appreciate his broader big-picture notes and micro notes at the same time. He caught things other readers missed; his suggestions super helpful and insightful. I look forward to using Chris's talents for many more scripts to come!”
Services & pricing
Choose the depth your draft needs.
From clean, industry-standard pages to detailed coverage, polishing and ongoing guidance. Prices are in USD.
Basic Formatting
Per script · maximum 120 pages
$197
- Professional proofreading and formatting to current industry standards
- Basic coverage of your screenplay
- 100% money-back guarantee if you are not completely satisfied
Deluxe Coverage & Formatting
Per script · maximum 150 pages
$297
- Professional proofreading and formatting to current industry standards
- Comprehensive screenplay coverage
- 100% money-back guarantee if you are not completely satisfied
Super Deluxe Coverage & Formatting
Per script · maximum 150 pages
$397
- Professional proofreading and formatting to current industry standards
- Comprehensive screenplay coverage
- Professional script polish for readers, contests or producers
- 100% money-back guarantee if you are not completely satisfied
Monthly Mentoring & Assistance
On-demand assistance throughout the month
$497 / month
- Response within 24 hours or less
- Access by email or messaging
- Unlimited queries, within reason
- Up to four one-hour conference calls
- Flexible month-by-month payment
Twice-Monthly Mentoring & Assistance
Two sessions per month
$347 / month
- Response within 24 hours or less
- Access by email or messaging
- Two one-hour conference calls per month
- Flexible month-by-month payment
Not sure which level fits? Send a short note about your draft, page count and deadline for a recommendation.
Frequently asked
Before you send the script.
Practical details about formats, timing, payment and the way we can work together.
What if I am not sure what kind of help I need?
If you have not specified what you would like me to do, I will quickly read through your script and communicate what I can do to improve it.
Which file formats do you accept?
I use the latest Final Draft, so .FDX is preferable. I can also accept .TXT as a first choice and .RTF as a second choice. Price variations may apply if your file requires a manual line-by-line transfer, or if typed or handwritten material needs to be entered manually.
How long will the work take?
It depends on the length of your screenplay, but I can complete an average script within one week or less.
Can you meet a rush deadline?
Yes, assuming there is enough time and it does not degrade the quality of your work or mine.
How much will my project cost?
Please contact me for further information. The service levels above are a starting point; the script and scope will determine the right fit.
When is payment due?
Considering that you are paying after I have completed the screenplay formatting work, at no risk to you, I would appreciate quick payment within 24 hours through PayPal.
What if I am not satisfied?
You have two options: first, give me an opportunity to fix what you do not like; or do not pay me. It is that simple.
Why is professional screenplay formatting important?
Consistency is key for your script and in the industry. Readers need to be able to quickly assess your writing—and focus on your story—not your formatting. If each writer had their own screenplay formatting style, reading would become unnecessarily challenging.
Do you offer a referral fee?
Yes. Refer your friends and I will send you 25% of what they pay on their first screenplay.
Is there a discount for sending more than one script?
Yes. Send two screenplays at once and I will give you 25% off.
Can I pay you after the script sells?
This is not a realistic option. Unless you already have a deal in place, there will most likely be no opportunity to add a provision that pays me later for this service.
Can we work together on an ongoing basis?
Yes. You can contact me regularly for help with your screenplay. This is a good option for students or writers who need continued guidance, including one-on-one calls depending on the frequency you choose.
About Chris
A writer’s eye. A reader’s clarity.
My name is Chris Lanning. I’m from Vancouver, Canada, working in Taipei, Taiwan and Vancouver. In both cities, I’m lucky to have a diverse community of directors, producers and screenwriters around me who share a passion for the business.
I have over 25 years of experience writing and editing feature-length screenplays and television scripts. In 2002, I co-wrote The Untold, released by Columbia TriStar Home Entertainment. I also have two optioned thrillers in the works: Stalker, to be produced in Taiwan, and The Quisling, to be produced in Vancouver and Mexico.
I specialize in helping screenwriters finish their scripts for agents, producers and contests. You are welcome to get in touch even if you are just starting.
CHRIS LANNING · SCREENWRITER & CONSULTANT
Questions, comments, queries, concerns?
Let’s talk about the draft.
Tell me where you are in the process, your page count and what kind of feedback you are looking for. If you are not sure which service fits, send the script with a short note and I will recommend the right level of help.
Email Chris
chris@screenwritingRx.com